Showing posts with label Writing process. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing process. Show all posts

Sunday, 27 May 2018

JOURNEY TO GIBRALTAR ~ Paperback now available

Since my last post... months ago... (I know my blogging is scarce and insignificant at the moment! So sorry) I am pleased to announce that I have reached another milestone.

JOURNEY TO GIBRALTAR now is available as a paperback, with a brand new cover & background.


I have also had two five star reviews and lots of lovely comments from family and friends that have made the time I spent on it so worthwhile. One of the reviews is from a top 500 reviewer... pretty amazed to get that one! Thank you.



My father is busy arranging the official book launch in August (Tuesday 7th for anyone interested). It sounds like it might be a busy event!

I also got featured in a GBC news program in Gibraltar - a pleasant surprise.

Anyway, I am so glad that it has finally come together. The challenge of editing, formatting, cover design, etc, is always HUGE! But, I am a sucker for punishment.

Getting up-to-date with A level work has also been taking its toll on me, but with Summer around the corner you never know... I might actually get back to writing one day!

Thank you for reading & all the best in your endeavours,
Vanessa

Wednesday, 7 December 2016

Back to School... #Writing versus #Maths

My mind is full of numbers at the moment... I have gone back to teaching maths and although I am enjoying it my mind boggles. Words have left and numbers have taken over!


Writing seems like a million miles away and I find it hard to believe that I wrote several books and published them not that long ago.

I am still working on my historical fiction book, but am apprehensive about publishing it until I am completely satisfied that it works. I also need to finish it since I decided not to make it a series.

The truth is that I still hold on to the dream of a publisher... my new book would really benefit from the advice of an agent.

So, my challenge for 2017 is to...

* FINISH IT
* SUBMIT IT TO AGENTS
* FINISH IT...

If all else fails, I will publish it myself... when I finish it!

It seems strange to think that I started this writing journey 7 years ago... and now it feels like nothing more than a dream.

I wonder how other self-published authors have done? Have any, like me, lost heart and decided to go back to the "day-job"?

After being a stay-at-home mum, I lost faith in my ability and hope that by teaching I can help some children to aspire to be more, to want more, and to achieve more than they ever dreamed possible.

It seems that nowadays it is easy to lose heart, to give up, and yet we have so much to smile about.

Happy Christmas to all!

Let's think about what we truly consider important next year.

Vanessa

Wednesday, 27 July 2016

A New Beginning...

As you can see from the lack of blog posts of late, I have been very busy... and writing, blogging, and basically having an online presence have proved difficult. To be honest, the fact that my iPad is old and no longer lets me use many Apps has made it harder.

Time for a new direction...
But, after going back to work as a Teacher this year for a few hours, I decided to apply for a new job and was lucky enough to get it! I am slightly apprehensive on this new post. I enjoy teaching a lot, but time will tell if the "call of the pen" returns.

For a while, I honestly thought writing would keep me happy for many years. But, I have found that writing is a lonely experience on the whole and even though I have developed a thicker skin I do care what readers think way too much. Many writers say to ignore ratings, etc, and this is true to an extent but the bottom line is that all low ratings mean is that no one is reading your books. Which makes me wonder what the point of it all is?

I wrote my books because I needed to use my brain and do something with my creative mind. Now, I want to work with people again and use my mind elsewhere. It's time to get back to the real world and stop living in a virtual place where the smallest things can get to you.

I admit that I have made some amazing friends online and learnt SO much via social media. This is something I intend to pass on to the students I teach. This world is ours for the taking... you have to fight for your convictions, live to your full potential, and never give up against adversity.

A new journey begins...
The world is slightly broken and via books and stories we can heal or come to terms with what is going on around us. People should read for fun, to learn, for escapism, or just to pass the time. Television stifles the mind in many ways - you are not allowed to create your own character or location from the vivid description on the pages - you are just shown! As much as I love the visual in SciFi, I know some books do it better! I have been reading Harry Potter to my youngest and then watching the film and she kept saying the book got it wrong - I was quick to correct her!

Education though is what makes us stronger... and, even though this is strange for a writer, I enjoy working with numbers! Mathematics has changed the world we live in today. Sometimes, not in a good way. But, advances in medicine, transport, technology, and accountability would be nowhere without numbers.

So back I go... to the land where children question the why, what, and when of everything. even if you occasionally get the odd "I can't be bothered!"

Like my coach used to say... "No pain, No Gain!" If the world was easy, life would be boring!

Keep in touch via Twitter & comment on this blog. I have not vanished... just taking a new direction.
Vanessa :)

Friday, 4 March 2016

A Writer's Life...


I am currently in a state of confusion over what to do with my writing. For the past year I have struggled to focus on finding time or the inclination to write. I think I am lacking confidence, which has never been difficult for me. When faced with a challenge I am sometimes quick to doubt that I am capable.

I have always been driven and hard-working, but it does not take much for that cloud of doubt to descend and darken my mood.

Since September, I have been teaching Mathematics for a few hours in a primary school. I have been extremely lucky to get this job and love it! I also tutor at home and get a lot out of this. I have always been good at helping children and get a sense of satisfaction in knowing that I could make someone smile.

This brings me back to writing.

This little cutie inspired me to write...
When I started back in 2010 I needed to write. I had to release all those thoughts that desperately wanted to fly. I needed escapism and wanted to create something that was mine - that I could be proud of. The truth is that I am extremely proud of what I wrote. Three novels, one novelette, six short stories... all in the space of 2 years! How I did this, don't ask... I have no idea.

The feedback I have had since sharing HYBRID on the 27th March 2012 has brought me from tears (of anguish when bad... as I expected everyone to hate it) to smiles and friendships. I have met so many readers, authors & joined so many online groups. I can't imagine a world where I am ever lonely again! Before the internet became a social tool, I never had anywhere to escape. Writing enabled me to find a place of my own, but it also led the road to social media - a place that always has more article, books, conversations, interesting posts, etc... than I could ever get through in a lifetime!

This is why I struggle to write... to persevere. I no longer need that sanctuary writing gave me. But, teaching again has given me that sense of belonging. I enjoy helping others as a teacher.

I also decided to get actively involved with the PTA again and this has also opened the door to more friendships. Yesterday, I helped out at a cake sale that raised £351. Very rewarding.


Writing can be a lonely and soul seeking journey and it is always interesting to hear why people write. You only have to go on to Twitter to see that there are thousands and thousands of writers... all with a voice longing to be heard. Some do it for financial gain, but most seem to be driven by their NEED to tell there story. Let's face it humanity is obsessed with the past. We want to know what people have done, will do, and hope to do. Our inquisitive minds have made discoveries beyond the realms of possibilities.

So, in writing this blog, I am smiling again. I understand that I can not stop writing, in the same way that I need to breathe. I probably will not end up with a bestseller, my new book might be a disaster and fail to impress.

I have no-one to impress but myself. What I have achieved is already out there. What I have not released is on my computer. So long as my children are happy and I still love my husband, what any strangers think of me is by the by.

I don't know who will read this, or what you will think, but at least by voicing my "issues" I try to deal with them in some way.

Thank you for reading,
Vanessa

Tuesday, 26 January 2016

Rejection... how do we deal with it?

I know I have not blogged much recently, more for lack of something to say really. I am writing, working, reading, spending time with family...

But, you might be interested to know that I decided to submit my novel to one agency for potential representation. I know... I wanted that one.

Now, I know I was probably asking for a rejection, based on the fact I did not take long to prepare it. In fairness, last time I tried I took ages and it got me nowhere. I felt that the writing should speak for itself, and with things being digital, they could either read it or not. I submitted what they asked for after all.

So, no surprises then when I received this yesterday...

"Dear Vanessa, 

Thank you for sending me The Victorian Dream and for giving me the opportunity to consider your work. 

I have read your material, but I did not feel it would be right for my list and therefore I am unable to offer you representation.

I am sorry not to be writing with better news, but I hope this response will not discourage you and I wish you all the best with your writing.

Best wishes"

Effectively a standard nondescript NO.

The truth is that agents get hundreds of submissions and have to wade through what is called the "slush pile" to find something that will sell to the masses. I understand, which is why I gave up nearly 4 years ago, that the chance of your work being picked is slim.

Interesting articles to read...

How to interpret Rejection Letters

I guess from my rejection email... the agent included my name, correct book title, and said they'd read the submission (hmm...). Not completely terrible, maybe?

Don't Give up until you've queried 80 agents or more

The problem with this article is that I have never been a patient person... Like was said in the classic and fantastic film, Shawshank Redemption "Get busy living or get busy dying"


I am sure an agency out there might my new novel. In fact, one was interested a few months ago when I took part in the #pitchwars via Twitter. But, I soon realised the books they had on their website had hardly any sales and they were not even going to print a hardback. Therefore, I can do it all myself again via KDP, Smashwords, and Createspace.

I once talked to an online friend, Terry Tyler, about this and she also said that she had given up on agents. She has written several blogs about this... A FEW SELF-PUBLISHING TRUTHS

I am unsure what to do now, since I would love to have more support and experience behind my historical novel. I am currently still writing up the original letters found by my parents for the second book in the series, and am unsure on whether to publish the first or not. Read my latest update... Finished the Diary!

I'll give myself a week or so to consider my options. At least, the agent did not say... "Give up Now!"

Either way, I think I will head Terry's advice and edit further - NOT another 'how to write' article - but it may help new writers...

Anyway, thank you to all who continue to support me.

TO AGENT OR NOT TO AGENT? That is indeed the question...

Vanessa :)

Friday, 12 June 2015

When life takes over

I have not been blogging much or spending much time online recently since life is taking over. Since my eye operation last year I also find that I can't spend hours watching the screen! There had to be a downside to having lazer surgery...

Anyway, I wanted to share my recent online experience. I took part in the recent #PitchWars (an opportunity on Twitter to pitch directly to agents/ publishers) and was asked for a sample by a publisher. After sending a chapter, with a brief intro (took me 5 mins to write!) I expected not to hear from them ever again. But, a few days later they asked for the full manuscript. Trust me, this was shocking BUT... it made me suspicious.

In my opinion, any publisher worth anything should take some time to reply. The fact it was that fast made me wary. When I checked them online, they have only been in business since 2013 and have a limited track record at the moment.

For a new author, with no idea how to arrange eBooks, paperback themselves, etc, this is great. No upfront costs, editing advice, and they'd publish your eBook and get ready a print to demand paperback.

BUT, I effectively am just like them. I can do all of this myself. I guess I'm a publisher!

So, I sent them an email thanking them for the interest and basically said, 'thanks, but no thanks.'

To which they replied the next day, 'we have decided not to proceed with your submission'... erm, I rejected them!

So, it was the right decision.

New authors have to be careful. I would always recommend that you try to get an agent first, unless your book is for a specialist market. Also, if your book fits a niche, but will not be the next big read then this type of publisher might be ideal.

But, I have a dream... my book deserved to be in hardback form.

If I can't get an agent and mainstream publisher, then I'll do it myself after all.

The good thing is that I have finished the first book in my new historical fiction saga. Now, the editing begins!

I have decided that it can't be one book after all. It's way too long.

I'll update as it goes, but watch this space... and be careful authors. If it sounds too good to be true, it usually is.

All the best & have a great weekend,

Vanessa :)

Monday, 16 March 2015

Advertising your eBooks? My experience as a Self-Published Author

Since I published my first ebook, HYBRID, in 2012 I have been plagued with the writers curse... "How to get noticed?"

Some self-published writers seem to effortlessly get to the top of the charts and I am constantly in awe of them!

Let's explain for those who do not know what a self-published writer is nowadays!

In my mind, a SP writer is someone who has published their work themselves.

They have arranged for the formatting, covers, proofreading, etc by themselves and then gone on to publish via Amazon, Smashwords, etc. They might have paid for some of these services, but ultimately they made all the decisions.

If you have an agent, publisher, or have paid a publisher to do the work for you, then in my books you have not self-published. When you get an agent and publisher who does it all for you and pays you an advance (amazing this) you are traditionally published. If you paid someone to publish it all for you then you are bracketed as using a "vanity" publisher.

Sorry, but this is the way I see it. I understand that you are a writer and might not want the hassle, but then you are not a SP author.

I pride myself in having done most of the work myself. I have been fortunate to have amazing help from people willing to proofread my books, and only recently paid for covers (thank you Shutterstock!) to use for my trilogy for the first time. This will hopefully prove to be a worthwhile investment. BUT, I have spent hours figuring out how to do everything and do not think I did it for vanity! It was a self imposed challenge.

My new covers - what do you think?
This being said, I want my hard work to be seen and to get some feedback for it. This is where it gets hard. Having not used any services there was no one to promote me. Ultimately, paying people to do things for you might get them to spread the word. At least, I'd like to think this is the case, but I do hear of many authors who have paid a lot of money and see no results.

So, the question... how is it done? How do you get seen?

This is my take on "success"...

1) Write a fantastic book. 

Make it different from the rest or follow the trend, and get readers of certain books attracted to yours. For example, for Twilight, Fifty Shades, or Harry Potter fans? A lot of readers like books that are formulaic.

2) Have a Book Launch (either a real one or virtual)

When I finished my trilogy, I held a book launch in Gibraltar and gave a talk on my experience. It was fantastic.

I sold lots of paperbacks, got my name out, was featured in magazines and the local newspaper, and had a ball!

I blogged about it HERE!


I was lucky though - people in Gibraltar are amazing and I have contacts. My dad knows many people...

3) Spread the word via Social Media and hope your friends, family and followers will tell others about it.

This tends to work well at the beginning, but fizzles out fast in my experience. You don't want to annoy close acquaintances by constant promotion. I find Twitter is the only place I tend to schedule posts. I have so many followers that I figure if it annoys anyone they'll simply unfollow me.

I suggest you use something like HOOTSUITE to schedule and CROWDFIRE to keep tabs on followers.

Facebook has a lot of groups that allow you to post your work. How effective this is is questionable. But, you never know... it might lead to some success. I think the reader groups are a better way to make friends and promote. If you are a writer you should be a reader too. If not, are you mad? Ha!

4) Use the Amazon threads to promote your work.

The discussion threads used to be a good place to advertise. Of late, I fear this is no longer the case. Too many promos going on.

5) Advertise with successful companies

In 2015, my plan was to let things go. To stop trying and give up. Then I decided to reinvest some of my takings.

Bear in mind that these promotions were to promote a FREE ebook - that's right, I give it away and then have to PAY to get it noticed! 

I have heard that BookBub is the place to go, but I never get in! I think they favour KDP promotions, or books with lots of reviews. I think this is unfair since the whole point of a giveaway is to get more reviews. But, they have a reputation to uphold so have the right to be picky. Saying this, I have seen some featured which are not the best books! They don't read them - the expression judge a book by it's cover comes to mind!

So, I tried FreeBooksy on a paid promotion. I had got featured on there last year by chance and had success. This worked a treat and my free eBook soared up the US Amazon charts. Since I also publish on smashwords, I also saw a huge increase in downloads via Barnes & Noble, iBooks, etc. I do have sales for the next books in my trilogy here too which is great. It is not cheap - $100! But, I think it was worth it and the customer service is fantastic. I am trying another in April for $200 - Eek! A series promoter... I'll have to let you know how it goes!

I have also tried a paid promotion for a free eBook feature with Facebook (£5 + £13), AwesomeGang ($10), Bookgoodies ($30), and KUFads (£10 - Book of the Day). All of these were a complete flop! I might as well have given the money away to charity...

6) FREE eBook promotion

As I have said in 5) I have paid for promotions to increase the visibility of my free ebook, HYBRID. Some of you might be asking how it is always free. Well, Amazon have a price-match policy. I have published my book via smashwords for FREE, which distributes to Barnes&Noble, Apple, etc. when Amazon see it is free they match it. You might have to inform them via their website though if it does not happen automatically.

This is a good idea if you have a series, or if you have many books to promote and want to offer one of your older books for free.

Again, the effectiveness of this is dubious now. When I first published in 2012, free eBooks were snapped up like hotcakes! However, with the constant offers via Amazon or mainstream publishers, us SP authors are no longer as attractive.

Readers are no longer attracted since they have had bad experiences with free eBooks. I admit this also happened to me, and many free ebooks I download disappoint me. Saying this, because it is free I am ruthless. I simply do not read it!

This is the downside. A free ebook will not inspire readers to review. I find myself more willing to review something I have paid for. Weird but true. So to all you readers out there, please review free books! (Like that's going to work!)

I do have a great site to recommend, which allows you to place your book for free. It may not work but it's free to try - Author Marketing Club

7) Sell your paperbacks at local events


I have tried this a few times. The first few times it was exciting, but I am not an aggressive salesperson! If you are you'll do just great :)

8) Participate in Reader forums like Goodreads

This is a great way to sell books, especially if you were a reader before you wrote a book!

Again, I have not found the confidence to pull this off well yet. But, I know others do a super job!

9) Write Another book

This is my worst offence at the moment. So I wrote a trilogy... and? You have to keep on writing to sell more books. If readers like what they see they will want to read more of your work. If you procrastinate and publish nothing new then what's the point?

Saying this, I also wonder what motivates some authors to continue. If you can't sell the books you have why publish?

My husband tells me I am too vain! I think maybe he has a point. I need some feedback or sales to make me believe that I am doing a good job. How sad am I?!

Ultimately, I have never continued with something that I have seen limited results for. I want to succeed. If I can't do it via writing I'll find something else to do with my time.

10) Think about why you write...

BUT, the truth is I NEED TO WRITE. I will always write... I know this now.

Today, I continued writing my next book and felt like writing this post. So I did. Sometimes, you have to vent in the direction your mind goes.

If by writing an idea down you find some peace or escapism from the world around you then you have succeeded no matter how low your sales are. I'll just keep telling myself this...


Thanks for reading & I hope this helps in some way.

All the best,
Vanessa

*~Okay, so now I can pitch my work!~*

HYBRID (The Evolution Trilogy) is FREE

Smashwords http://ow.ly/AbP0V

After HYBRID…

Get the entire trilogy (and prequel, EMILY) in a boxset via Amazon only http://www.bookgoodies.com/a/B00K24EA0U

Wednesday, 3 December 2014

Mark Fine discusses his novel, "The Zebra Affaire"

Thank you, Mark, for agreeing to be ‘interviewed’ via my blog. First things first, time for us to find out about you, via one of your books. I read “The Zebra Affaire” and got sucked in! This was my review…

5 stars – Review on Amazon and Goodreads

“The fictional tale of Elsa, a white native South African, and Stanwell, a black foreigner from Malawi, and their forbidden love story within the harsh Apartheid regime of South Africa in 1976 is beautifully written and I shed a tear at its climax. The addition of non-fiction extracts throughout the story added a depth to the tale that made the situation more real. With the death of Mandela in 2013 it is important to reflect on both the man and the situation in his native South Africa.

I have recently been reading many historical fiction novels based on slavery and colonialism and was extremely glad to stumble across this book. The fact I have Dutch relatives only added to my appreciation of the novel, since I understand the language somewhat.

This is not a typical narrative, but it is definitely a book I would recommend to anyone interested in issues concerning racism and inequality within a tense romantic setting.”

What do you think of my review?

I’m touched my historical fiction novel moved you, emotionally. The fact that you cried tears, rather than was bored to tears, is a wonderful compliment. It meant you became vested in the plight of the principal characters’ struggle at the centre of the story, despite the unkind real-world circumstances they both faced.

I also agree with your supposition that it’s important to consider Nelson Mandela’s legacy. Will his shining example be emulated?  Or will current and future South African leadership follow the tragic norm in Africa—that of abuse of power, corruption and incompetence?  I hope for the former, but frankly I fear the latter will be closer to the truth…

If I must critique your review, there is one change I’d suggest. The third paragraph as written seems to suggest “The Zebra Affaire” was written in Dutch (not English). I know your intention was to say “…the novel feels very authentic because some of the local colloquialisms, a curse here an exclamation there, are written in the Afrikaans language—derived from South Africa’s first Dutch settlers.” [Fair point, Mark…  I am happy to be corrected!]

By the way I appreciate your elegant summary of my book with your phrase “… (it’s about) issues concerning racism and inequality within a tense romantic setting.” Perfect. [So glad you liked this]

What or who inspired you to write this story?

Though they don’t realize it, I would have to credit my two sons. I have this belief that if a people don’t know their history, they are destined to be forever lost. It was important to me that my sons learned about their African roots from their father; but my personal story isn’t that interesting. So I chose to couch the story from the perspective of far more intriguing characters, that of Elsa (who’s white) and Stanwell (who is black). The cruel dynamics of the love-struck couple’s story is all theirs, but the place and time that I inserted them is very much mine. This then provided me with the platform to shine a bright light on the dark underbelly of racism and tribalism. 

I was brought up in Gibraltar and I experienced the opposite. I felt like an alien for being a redhead and so pale, whilst living amongst tanned brunettes! Do you think people are always faced with some form of oppression wherever they are?

Such a complicated topic: and one that inevitably devolves into name-calling, hyper-sensitivity and frustration.  But let’s first focus on two specific words you used, Vanessa: “always” and “oppression”.  No, I don’t believe being different inevitably leads to oppression. As a personal anecdote: I arrived in a frigid, snowbound Minnesota neighbourhood in 1981—and to my surprise I found myself considered “an exotic”—apparently I was the first “white African” that this American Midwest community had met! And as such I was rather revered. I’m sure, unfortunately, that this isn’t everyone’s experience.

Vanessa, drilling deeper to the true intent of your question, you are certainly correct. There is little doubt that generally humans are not tolerant of others unlike themselves. And that this corrosive behaviour is in the end mutually destructive.  I wish the lessons of the past were learned, but that’s not the case. (Hence the need for historical fiction to constantly remind us.) Instead, we compulsively repeat the same disgraceful patterns of individual and institutional torment. Sadly, there is always a chosen victim that predators—like bullies in a schoolyard, gang up against. And invariably the victim is a minority. Except in apartheid South Africa! Here the oppressed were the majority. This shocking fact alone makes “The Zebra Affaire” a story worth telling.

If someone from South Africa in 1976 time-travelled to the present day, what do you think they would say?

A 1976 South African would be devastated by what they’d witness in today’s 2014 South Africa. Despite the fall of apartheid and the wonderful vision of Nelson Mandela’s “Rainbow Nation”—under the corrupt and incompetent leadership of current president Jacob Zuma, the nation is leaderless. Though the cruel laws of apartheid have been removed, they’ve been replaced by rapacious black tribal elites who are lining their own pockets to the detriment of their own people—and are using progressively blunt tools to keep the masses in check.

 And so I know what a time-traveller would say for I personally know such a person. A veteran of the guerrilla war against apartheid that was forced into exile for decades during the long campaign for liberation, and lifetime member of the ANC (African National Congress); this veteran is distraught by the self-inflicted wounds forced on the nation by the current administration. “I cannot believe this is what we fought for,” were the words shared with me, “I guess we have to soldier on.” The sense of betrayal felt by this veteran of the liberation struggle was palpable. Such a shame! [I agree… humans are capable of so much, yet they fail on so many levels when competing against each other for dominance!]

Why do you think no one speaks out when violence is staring them in the face? Is fear the reason people ignore abuse? For example, in hindsight, it is easy to point the finger at Nazi Germany, but The Book Thief recently got me thinking. I imagine most people did not know what was going on. How do you think people who do know live with themselves? Are they just evil?

Without a doubt it is primarily fear. Becoming invisible is a natural survival instinct; akin to an ostrich sticking its head in the ground. Though it may save one’s neck in the near term, it does not guarantee one’s long term survival. Appeasing a bully really doesn’t work, but it takes a special strength to stand up to that bully, alone. Clearly British Prime minister Neville Chamberlain blinked when dealing with Hitler, but to your point: he didn’t really know what was going on. Surely the true villains were the German political and military leadership who were well aware of the illegal military build-up and other secretive behind the scenes preparations. These senior men stood by and did absolutely nothing.  Certainly some were evil, some were ambitious, some were ideologues, but most were cowards.

In South Africa there was a duality that added further confusion—or plausible deniability to this mix. As I wrote in The Zebra Affaire: “Elsa was no racist. She never had to be; her government assumed that responsibility.” What I’m attempting to say is that Elsa never had to face within herself any personal demons of racism, she never had to go there, ever, as the laws scripted the rules of behaviour between the racial groups, and as such relieved her of any personal responsibility.  So add to the above list of sins, indifference.

Do you think love breaks down all barriers? Is not the point of, for example, the classic “Romeo & Juliet” that forbidden love is both a curse and a cure?

Love certainly has the potential to break down all barriers. I’ve always been intrigued by that which triggers the attraction between two distinctly different individuals; and in doing so creates such an immutable bond that very little can destroy it. I even question whether death can destroy it. For example in the “Romeo & Juliet” scenario, though the two lovers die their love ultimately lives on in the reconciliation of their two warring families. Or maybe I’m just a romantic… [nothing wrong with being a romantic!]

How did you find mixing fiction with fact in such an obvious way? At times, this detracted from the story, but I found it helpful and emotional. Especially at the end.

I had three principles guiding me: entertain, inform and to be sincere. If it was solely a work of fiction it would have been easier to write, as I would not have been bound by the inconvenience of facts. But “The Zebra Affaire” is an important story, and quite disturbing considering these events happened not too long ago. So I needed it to be believed, and so I wrote it in a way that it was both authentic and sincere. This realization compelled me to fill the reader’s knowledge gap on South African history. 

To do so I could have used conventional Chicago Manual of Style formats such as footnotes and endnotes to provide the historical or societal constructs of the period. But footnotes are tiny, difficult to read. And endnotes, they are parked somewhere at the back of book. So I introduced something novel—one reviewer called them “anywhere notes”—where I provide italicized expositions within the context of narrative.  Judging by the accolades this technique has received readers have embraced this format and now better understand the motivations of the characters (both good and venal) as the tension in the story builds.

Do you find it hard to write historical fiction? Do you spend hours doing the research?

Research took a year, including wonderful weeks in the field—the South African bush, documenting the behaviour of the animals in their natural environment. The climax of the story needed the suspense of an authentic safari. And it was crucial the animals and the bushveld played their role in supporting the human saga unfolding within their midst. I used both a video- and still camera to record these experiences; and I personally enjoyed reliving these moments when writing the story.

Writing historical fiction is a double-edged sword; there’s the benefit of an existing structure of date-stamped facts, but then there is the deficit when facts refuse to conform to the fictional narrative’s structure. But for me it is well worth the trade-off. I learn so much during the research process.  Believe me, it’s really interesting stuff—quite eye-opening actually. And for me a reward for working in the historical fiction genre is knowing that I’m able to transfer this knowledge to the reader within the context of a compelling, vivid story—set in an exotic location, without any of the pain of formal study. 

But I must emphasise, my objective is to first entertain. I’m focused on creating memorable characters, within a story construct that is filled with suspense, fraught with danger, and filled with passion. It just happens that the reader will learn something new about their world as the story unfolds.

Do you think social media is important? If so, how do you prioritise your time?

Vanessa, I wish I was as capable as you in this social media space. [I can but try…] Yes, it is important and I have found myself engaging with folks from all around the world due to its no-cost ubiquity and reach. I was delighted by the generosity displayed by strangers on social medial when creating the book. For example, I polled their opinion when selecting the best book cover.

Regarding the promotional reach, it has also proven to be helpful. In fact, Vanessa, that’s how we met. But I must admit it consumes too much of my time. This is due to my inability to process it efficiently.  I’d like to think it’s a flaw in the structure of Facebook, Twitter, Google + or whatever, but being honest I’m probably not using these platforms correctly. In short I’m overwhelmed by the volume of data I don’t need, and I’m constantly missing the most important stuff. Time to send out an S…O..S… [Ha, ha... I'll have the lifeboat waiting for you!]

Do you have an author you admire? If so, why?

It is not a coincidence that historical fiction is my genre of choice. It’s by reading Herman Wouk (“Winds of War”), Leon Uris (“Exodus”) and Irving Stone (“The Agony and the Ecstasy”) that I learned so much—without realizing it, because they are masters of weaving wonderful tales that both enthral and inform. These are the best attributes of good historical fiction. Add Ken Follett, Alice Walker, Tom Clancy and South African greats, Wilbur Smith and Andre Brink and I’ve been fortunate to have feasted on a rich, fulfilling diet of magnificent literature. My current favourite is Alan Furst (“The Foreign Correspondent”).

[I have read & enjoyed Leon Uris and Ken Follett… my husband is a fan of most of these!]

Where we can find out more about you and buy your books?

Vanessa you are welcome anytime to visit my site, leave a comment or two, and hopefully write a guest blog.  Your readers are most welcome as well. You will find me at my BLOG 


“The Zebra Affaire” is available to purchase in both paperback and Kindle editions via AMAZON.

Thank you for taking the time to speak to me.


Vanessa, it’s my pleasure. I very much appreciated your interesting questions.

Thursday, 6 November 2014

Visiting Relatives

Last week, I spent a few days in my hometown of Gibraltar so that we could see my parents again and have a catch-up!

YES... we are at the very top!
Unfortunately, the weather was not as good as last year, but it was good to see that the cheeky monkeys are still up to trouble...


This one snatched the bottle out of this girl's hand, then was thwarted when he could not open it!


The monkeys (or Barbary apes as I always knew them growing up) lives are very special in Gibraltar.


It's always a treat to see them running free, looking after their young, and sauntering past you out in the open.

HELP! We're trapped!
We also got a chance to see St Michael's Caves, where I had a soup that tasted just like my grandmother used to make it!
St Michael's Caves
It was fantastic to go back home and the weather was beautiful on the first day. I love watching the fish leap out of the water in Camp Bay. My youngest thought they wanted to eat her!

Anyway, I managed to get lots more information for my next novel... with so much to consider, I wonder if I'll ever get it done?

Either way, I am now volunteering at the local library and Foodbank, and have a lunchtime job at my children's school - it's nice to be needed! I am trying to write, but am finding it hard to stay motivated and focused. Perhaps, I am "burnt out" or suffering from writers block! Being an indie author takes its toll eventually...

Thank you for reading, enjoy the pictures, and keep smiling!

Vanessa

P.s.

I did manage to publish another eBook on the 31st - EMILY is now live!

Friday, 31 October 2014

Happy Halloween

Happy Halloween all!

Today I have been very busy with the kids! I have gone shopping, made cakes & giant cookies, hollowed out a butternut squash (no pumpkins available), made a lovely soup, and (catches breath) made a cottage pie... PHEW!

And over all this, today was the day my novella, EMILY, became available to read via all eReaders!

I know I should be overjoyed & excited about this, but the truth is I am really nervous and can only hope the feedback (if any) is good.

I wrote Emily to fill a gap and to understand my character better when I was writing RETURN. I never knew if I would ever finish to story. In the end, I had fun completing it and when I shared it with a few friends & readers they enjoyed it...

I have to admit that there is a bit of an eighties flashback going on during the plot. A lot of memories that for some will mean nothing, and for others will hopefully raise a smile. I spent HOURS rewinding and fixing cassettes when I was growing up! I thought I was so cool walking around with my Sony Walkman, which was massive compared to today's tiny music devices!

Anyway, for your enjoyment, here is an exclusive extract from EMILY...

The shop was massive inside. Music was playing, but she could not see the speakers. There were plenty of records and little boxes with the same picture neatly organised in alphabetical order. She picked one up, but it was sealed so she could not open it to look inside.

‘That’s a cassette, you know that right,’ Paul asked.

‘No, I’ve never seen one before,’ she snapped. She did not want to be nasty, but this was getting ridiculous. Why didn’t they have cassettes back home? She always thought they were up to date – so much for that.

‘You’re funny. Come with me.’

He grabbed her hand and led her to the counter. ‘Can you pass me a cassette, please? She’s never seen one.’

‘Really?’ The man looked flummoxed, then shrugged his shoulders and handed one over.

‘This is a cassette. The music is recorded onto it and you put it in a cassette player.’

‘It’s small compared to a record.’

‘That’s why it’s better than a record. Saying that, sometimes the tape gets caught and I have to fix it with sellotape. It’s not perfect. Difficult. Records also get scratched. Okay, stop looking at me like that. I know I’ve gone all nerdy. I like my music.’

‘I’m interested – promise.’ Totally interested.

‘Anyway, cassettes and records – until someone comes up with something better. As if, right?’ he laughed aloud.

‘Yes,’ she laughed with him. ‘Nothing could be better than this.’

You can read the rest and find out what happens by clicking on the links!

Thank you for your support, Vanessa

Amazon    Smashwords    Barnes & Noble   iTunes 

Emily has not changed in fifty years. A freak accident made her immortal, or so she thinks. When she is finally allowed to return to her beloved England all is not as she expected. So much has changed. The past she was holding onto does not exist. Since the Second World War, people have embraced a new age. In this era, people have an obsession with gadgets, strange clothes and weird music.

Added to this her blood-lust has become insatiable and her promise to control herself is torn to shreds. That is until she meets Paul. She never expected to find love... and when it happens, can she do what it takes to hold on to it?

Fate has never been kind to Emily, and it gives her everything she wants at a cost. She must pay a price for being a murderer. For within her twisted heart lies a dark soul.





Saturday, 11 October 2014

Blogging blues...

I have not had much motivation to blog recently... by the time I've caught up on Twitter, Facebook, emails, etc I try to knuckle down to the reason I started all this - WRITING FICTION!

It is very easy in this day and age to get lost in the frenzy of social media and lose focus. I know, I have done it a lot.

Also, after you have a few books out it becomes a bit of an obsession to keep checking your rating and to see how many sales (or lack of) you have made. I find the issue of selling, especially on Amazon, fascinating.

I have recently began to understand the power of "buddy" sales and can see why a book like Fifty Shades went viral after a massive following online spread the word. This is the key to sales for any unknown author who has been published via a small press or self-published! You need readers...

Readers are easy to find if you interact with them on a daily basis. They will rally around you, protect you, and most importantly review.

Help! I'm stuck up here...
However, if, like a lot of writers, you have been focusing on the craft and not engaging with your potential audience then, regardless of how fantastic your book is, the truth is you might not make many sales. This is not important if you are happy with your finished product and you just wanted it out there. If you wanted to be a bestseller... you might be in for some disappointment.

I recently wrote this simple fact.

In order to sell books you have to be visible.

In order to be visible you have to sell books.

Which came first, the chicken or the egg?

So, my advice is this... if you want to sell books join a book-club on Goodreads and start to make contacts. Do it because you love books - after all, what writer doesn't?

I have met some amazing people online. I have to think of the positives not the negatives! I hope you do too...

All the best,
Vanessa

P.s. I have also finished my novella - click on this link of you want to know more => EMILY

Sunday, 14 September 2014

Prada and Prejudice - Katie Oliver tells all!

Welcome, Katie Oliver, and thank you for agreeing to ‘talk’ to me via my blog.

Thank you, Vanessa.  It’s lovely to be here!

First things first, time for us to find out about you, via one of your books… I read “Prada and Prejudice” and got sucked in! This is my review…

4 stars – Review on Amazon and Goodreads

“I got this book for FREE when I did a search of the top 100 the other day ... after getting a mixed assortment I started reading this one & was so hooked I read it in a day!

The thing about a book like this is that it enables complete escapism into a chick-lit world! The characters are not average, the situations are far-fetched... BUT... I loved it! Sometimes, I don't want to read a story that's real - I want one where I laugh, muse and cheer for the characters.

I thought the main characters had everything that is great about British humour - it's so dry (especially with men!) I also liked the depth to the story and underlying issues that surrounded the central characters. So much more going on than a lazy spoilt rich girl.

Not sure it is like Pride & Prejudice at all though. If you liked Bridget Jones - this is the book for you. The central male character had "hints" of Darcy, but in my opinion is nothing like him. He works hard for a living, Darcy was a "gentleman". Natalie is definitely more Bridget Jones than Elizabeth Bennett!”

What do you think of my review?

I think it’s a lovely review, and I think you really “got” the essence of what I tried to do when I wrote the book.  My intention with Prada and Prejudice was to pen a fun, frothy, entertaining story – something to make the reader forget about that overbearing boss, that towering stack of laundry in the basket, that miserable, hour-and-a-half commute home.  I wrote what I like to read but couldn’t always find…something romantic and funny, with characters I cared about and with a darker ‘edge’ - in this instance, in the form of Ian Clarkson and his obsession with Natalie Dashwood. {I agree ... Clarkson had real issues! Eek!}

Since I am a HUGE Pride & Prejudice fan, I have to ask, are you?

Oh, yes, unquestionably!  I’ve read the book, I’ve seen every film version (not to mention the BBC miniseries with Colin Firth, and that unforgettable damp shirt!) - {who could forget that damp shirt... I'm feeling faint all of a sudden}, and I’ve watched Bridget Jones’s Diary a half-dozen times, as well.  

Pride and Prejudice is a classic of literature because of the emotion Jane Austen invested in the story…because her characters are memorable and real…and because it’s a story that still resonates with modern readers. 

You story is unique and different, but it is obviously targeted at women who love Austen. Is this a genre you have always loved to read, and what inspired you to start writing about Natalie and Rhys?

Thank you!  The Dating Mr Darcy tagline was conceived as a way to present the three books as a cohesive series, although each can be read on its own.  While they are similar to Jane Austen’s books in that they feature the romantic misadventures of a particular set of characters, I tried to take the books in their own, unique direction.

I was inspired to write Prada and Prejudice one evening while watching “Kitchen Nightmares,” featuring Gordon Ramsay. On this particular episode, Gordon travelled to Boca Raton, Florida to try and salvage a failing Italian restaurant.  The restaurant owner was a headstrong Italian princess, and the conflict between her and Chef Ramsay was epic…it was also hilarious, and even touching at one point, when she broke down in tears.

I began to play the writer’s favourite game, ‘what if,’ and imagined what would happen if a strong character like Ramsay came in to salvage a troubled British department store and butted heads with a stubborn, spoilt girl accustomed to having her own way – and Rhys Gordon and Natalie Dashwood came into being.

I have to admit that I am crushing on Rhys at the moment! Does he have qualities of men you have met? Do any exist? (Ha ha… lucky my husband does not read my blog!)

Good thing my husband doesn’t read my books!  LOL.  Rhys is pretty hot, isn’t he?  He’s smart, street savvy, determined and ambitious – and yet he isn’t conventionally handsome.  In my mind, Rhys is a little bit Daniel Craig, with the personality and drive of Gordon Ramsay, and he’s a little bit Ewan McGregor.  He’s slightly rough around the edges.  He has a temper.  But there’s no one more dependable or fiercely loyal to those he loves. {Sigh... I'm feeling faint AGAIN}

What do you think it is about ‘Darcy qualities’ that drives so many women (including me) crazy?

In fact, one of my most popular (and most Tweeted) blogs is “The Enduring Appeal of Jane Austen’s Men,” which asks that very question:  what is it, exactly, that keeps us coming back to Mr Darcy, Colonel Brandon, Henry Tilney, and Mr Knightley?  The answer, I think, is that they are all good and decent men, but they are also flawed and human.  They are passionate.  They love deeply and completely.

What woman can resist that?

Natalie came across as very shallow and stupid at the beginning. Honestly, she improved because she was a really nice person, but I got the impression a lot of the initial attraction was all about looks. Do you think lust is just as important as love in a relationship?

I think it’s a very good starting point!  LOL.  Seriously, while physical attraction is important and is what initially draws us to someone else, it’s that person’s inner qualities that keep us coming back for more.  Kindness, a sense of humour, compassion, loyalty – they’re all far more important traits than physical beauty, which, let’s face it, fades over time. {So, so true... unless you pay for surgery! LOL}

The world in which Natalie lives is not the world most of us come from… do you think this is what makes reading these kind of books/ watching chickflick movies appealing? I certainly loved escaping into this world. For example, a £11,000 chandelier is not what every person would consider a reasonable purchase – Natalie was crazy!

Natalie, at least in the beginning of the book, has a very vague concept of financial reality and absolutely no idea what a budget is!  This is due to her privileged upbringing and the fact that her father died when she was eleven.  For most of her life, her mother and her grandfather, Sir Richard, have indulged her.  She’s a kind girl with a good heart – she simply has no idea how to manage money, because she’s never had to, and she’s ill-prepared to cope in the wake of the failing department store’s losses.

I definitely do like to escape into a world different from my own!  I think the appeal of chick flicks and chick lit is that they allow us to identify with heroines like Rebecca Bloomwood and her shopping excesses, Bridget Jones and her endless diets, and Andie Sachs and her fashion fails, while allowing us a glimpse into the worlds of high finance, or publishing, or high-end fashion magazines.  It just goes to show that everyone – no matter how rich or famous or powerful – has the same need to love and be loved.

To help budding authors reading this, can you tell us a bit about how you came to publish your books?

I wrote the books mostly on weekends and in free moments.  Up until very recently I worked full time, so writing was something I squeezed in whenever I could.  When I finished the third book, I approached the Elaine English Literary Agency in Washington, DC for representation and submitted “Love and Liability.”  Although they couldn’t use it at the time, Elaine referred me to Nikki Terpilowksi, who had just left to start her own agency, Holloway Literary.

Nikki emailed me and asked to see a synopsis and the first 50 pages, and then asked for the entire manuscript.  After reading it she offered me representation.  Needless to say, I was thrilled!

What was the editorial process like?

It was a bit daunting the first time.  Since Carina UK bought all three books, there were things like continuity to consider.  And each book had to stand alone, so that readers who hadn’t read the first book could follow the characters in the second or third. I think there were initially 11 pages of revisions for Prada and Prejudice.  But my editor, Helen, did an amazing job of shaping and refining the story into the wonderful read it is now.

It’s gotten easier with each successive book…I’ve learned to ‘think like an editor’ and anticipate the things an editor might comment on, and I try and fix them before they get tagged.

At the moment, many people have mixed views on social media. Do you think it is important? (I found you on Twitter – how fantastic is that!) If so, how do you prioritise your time?

I do think social media is important, and whether we like it or not – it’s here to stay.  I love Twitter and I’ve met so many lovely people (like yourself) there!  To me, it’s not a chore at all – it’s fun.  I have a Facebook author page and Goodreads and Amazon author pages as well.

I try to Tweet in the mornings and throughout the day, most days.  I’m on Facebook and Goodreads sporadically, but I try to pop in at least once or twice a week.  It’s sometimes tough as a writer to juggle social media with writing responsibilities, particularly if I’m on a deadline – as I am now.  I’ve learned to wing it and do the best I can.  But for me, writing always comes first.

Do you have an author you admire? If so, why?

Just one?  LOL.  I admire Helen Fielding; she defied the standard romantic convention at the time and wrote about a woman who wasn’t rail-thin, who didn’t work in a glamorous job, but who, like most of us, struggled with her weight and disastrous boyfriends and dead-end jobs.  And despite her failings and foibles, we all fell in love with Bridget Jones.

What are you working on now? Tell us about it…

I’m writing the sixth book in the Dating Mr Darcy series, “Prada in New York.”  Natalie persuades Rhys to let her come along with him to Manhattan to open a new Dashwood and James store.  Holly James is in the city as well – her boyfriend, chef Jamie Gordon, is opening his first US restaurant in midtown.

Natalie is dismayed to learn that Rhys has a sexy new personal assistant, Darcy Quinn.  She’s convinced that Darcy wants a bit more from Rhys than just a pay raise.  Holly is equally dismayed when she meets Jamie’s gorgeous new sous chef, Catherine.  He’s spending more time with Catherine than he is with her!  So when ex-flame Alex Barrington reappears in her life, Holly finds herself wondering…did she choose the wrong man?

There’s also a cat burglar on the loose, and when he steals a portrait of Natalie’s father from the apartment, Nat is determined to catch the thief.

Where we can find out more about you and buy your books?

Kobo US - http://store.kobobooks.com/en-US/ebook/prada-and-prejudice-dating-mr-darcy-book-1
Katie Oliver Website - http://katieoliver.com/ko/

The perfect trilogy for Austen-and-shopping-mad fans! Give in to your love of scandal and Prada in this glamorous collection of the Dating Mr Darcy trilogy!

Prada and Prejudice
He’s a man in possession of a large fortune….but is he in want of a wife?!
It is a truth universally acknowledged that Natalie Dashwood loves to shop. After all, as the heiress to the renowned London department store Dashwood & James she’s been wearing designer shoes since she could walk! But a socialite’s life isn’t as perfect as you might imagine… Natalie’s spending is spiraling slightly out of control, her rock star boyfriend is engaged to someone else, and it seems the family business is in financial crisis. New high-flying business exec Rhys Gordon has been brought in to save the company from ruin, but what are his motives? And infuriatingly even a shoe-shopping spree can’t take her mind off his distracting and oh-so-charming smile…
Couture and confetti mix with scandal and intrigue in this wonderful tale of retail, romance and redemption.
Love and Liability
Sometimes your sensibilities make absolutely no sense!

Holly James is looking for her big break. A young journalist for BritTEEN magazine, she is dying to write about something more meaningful than pop stars and nail varnish. So when she spots a homeless teenager outside the office, she feels compelled to tell her story. But her evil boss Sasha has other ideas…
Holly is sent to interview a city solicitor she has never heard of. But Alex Barrington turns out to be the very opposite of fusty and boring and Holly’s interest struggles to stay strictly professional!

With Sasha sabotaging her every move, and her story about teens on the street leading her into London’s dark underworld, Holly is chasing both love and success at the same time. But happy endings like that only happen in books don’t they…?
Mansfield Lark
Gemma Astley has succeeded where so many others have failed. She has somehow managed to tame tearaway rock star Dominic Heath and stop his womanising ways for good. But just as they find happiness, Dominic’s secret aristocratic past becomes public knowledge, and jeopardises everything.

Dominic is actually Rupert Locksley, heir of Mansfield House, a crumbling stately home that needs major financial investment to save it from ruin.

Dominic’s mother pleads for his help, but his father, the Earl, is on the verge of disinheriting him. Meanwhile Dominic’s new status as Mansfield’s long-lost heir attracts the attention of cut-throat socialite Bibi Matchington-Alcester, who means to make him hers at any cost.


Gemma and Dominic will need to test the strength of their foundations – as well as those of Mansfield House – if either are to remain standing.